Shape poem

Just a few days ago I make a shape poem.
This is the poem....

Peace park poem

The peace park was so quite

like a room with nothing in it

The park was full of fresh air

Pollution cant disturb the park

The park has a giant bell

Chinese words written in it 

The bell was in a pagoda

Up high in a hill at the park

There was also a small pool

The water in the pool was clear

The bottom of the pool were rocks

With plants that surround the pool

so much depends upon poem

We just read the poem the Red Wheel Barrow by William Carlos Williams. Then we write a poem almost like his poem.

This is the poem:

So much depends upon
A useful laptop
To become a great devise
To open a successful future

So much depends upon
A thinker pen
To become a fast ride
To learning

So much depends upon
A shiny camera
As a small time machine
To see the past

Blue car poetry (spoken)

In these past few days we were working in a blue car poetry in the book Love That Dog. I record the poem in an application called Garage Band then we upload it to sound cloud. It was fun when I was playing with the beats because all the music was so good to hear.

Now please listen to my podcast. 


Blue car Blue car by wyan jonathan

After we  do the blue car poem we started to create our own poem. I write the poem about trees. The poem is just a simple 4 line poem. It's so hard to do this for me because I must think hard to make the poetry. The poem that I make is almost the same like the blue car poem.

Enjoy my poem!

Future Trees by wyan jonathan

poetry

We are starting to study poetry in my English class and I don't know poetry at all but i know how to write poetry in Bahasa Indonesia language. Last Friday we go outside and I feel comfortable but when a beetle approaches to me I was terrified and go to an other place. 

Yesterday my teacher say about the walls that around me, I understand the walls that makes me not share anything at all too others and the walls was buildup if someone laughing at us, humiliate us, and mocking us. I agree that people that always been laughing, humiliate, and mocking us all the time were scared to open up. I think the way to open the wall that we make poetry's to break/open the wall. Maybe my wall is a little big because some of my class mates always mocking me all the time but I always talk and kidding with my little sister all the time at home.   

I hope that if I learn poetry maybe I can open my self a little bit. I also hope that this activity will be interesting and fun.

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