Fixing My Inquire Blog Post movie

A few weeks ago I make a blog post about inquires. The post has a lot of mistakes in it.

I was curious about the IB learner profile? Since I am in the SWA school IB learner profile is new for me. I also not understand about this IB learner profile. I was curious about this because I am not understand what i the IB school progresses and what is the IB for our live.

The first time I curious about this that my mom will move me to SWA school that was an IB school. Then I started to questioning what is an IB school but that question I almost forgotten the question because I play games that sometimes make me forgot everything. At the first day at SWA I just remembered the question. The IB learner profile has the word like open-minded, inquirer, balanced, etc.

This question I already questioned for maybe 6 months.

I am the person that also sometimes always ask questions like maybe a day without questions and a day that I always ask questions.

This is the movie that I made to fix the errors.

Then this is the inquire blog post after I fix it.

I was curious about the IB learner profile? Since I am in the SWA school IB learner profile is new for me. I also do not understand about this IB learner profile. I was curious about this because I am do not understand the IB school progresses and what is the IB for our live.

The first time I was curious about this that my mom will move me to SWA School that was an IB school. Then I started to question what is an IB school. That question I almost forgotten because I play games that sometimes made me forgot everything. At the first day at SWA I just remembered the question. The IB learner profile has the word like open-minded, inquirer, balanced, etc.



This question I already questioned for maybe 6 months.



I am the person that also sometimes asks questions like a day without questions and a day that I always ask questions.

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The Ghost Town

 

One dark night there was a small town filled with Blood sucking Vampires! And they always said, "We love blood!" There were also scary mummy's who screamed, "graaaawwww! hungry ware wolves shriek,"aaauuuuuuu we want meat!"and ghosts that always said with a spooky sound" I will haunted youuuuuu." These freaks alwys wrecked the town for fun.

In this town there was a person named Dr. Palbo who wanted to get rid of these freaks because they were evil and always hurt people. So he created a space jet and "boooooooom" he went to outer space to search for aliens to scare away the monsters in the town.

While he was flying through space, he saw an alien ship. He called them on the computer and said, “Hello aliens, I come in peace.”
“What did you want earthling?” said the aliens.
“Can you help me to scare away the monsters at my small town because they always wrecked my town.”
“Wait a minute did you say monsters!” the aliens said.
“Yes!” Dr. Palbo replied.
“What kind of monsters in your town?” the aliens asked.
“There were vampires, mummies, ware wolfs, and ghosts.”
“Good! We already spent a lot of time to search these monsters for our species book.” With happily they said.
“So do you agree?”
“Yes!” the aliens replied.

Then the aliens agreed because they liked to investigate the scary monsters, and so they landed in the town, but sometimes they had problems because they hated dogs.
“ Hey a green delicious meats yummy!” said the dog.
“ Oh no!!!!!” the aliens shouted.
Then the other aliens replied, ”If we get near the dogs we will feel burned.”
“ Don’t run. Why is a meat can run?” asked the dogs.
“AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!! Get away” they said with panic sound and quiver.
“Lets use our teleporters!”
Then they lost the dogs.

The dogs always chased them, but they still can scare away the freaks and they scrambled out from town to avoid the aliens to investigate them and abandon the town so the small town is saved. And the friendly aliens went back to their lovely home planet.

THE END

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